Friday, February 15, 2008

Illustration Friday: Theory


"The dress was not only perfect for Easter Sunday, but it was also on sale. Sally theorized that her mom would buy it for her."

Here is a new stage of the illustration that I began last week for IF (originally for "Choose").
See the previous posts here and here. Moving right along, I've made several changes to the composition and took a lot of your great comments into consideration, and implemented some of them. THANKS to you all who chimed in with your feedback, comments and suggestions!

Next step: coloring/texturing in. I'm liking the changes! What do you think, so far?

15 comments:

noodleoodle said...

Very cute. Great line work.

Rui Sousa said...

Nice concept, really great!

Heather said...

Very adorable. :)

marcisenders said...

Adorable!

Roberta said...

This is cute! I like the changes. It reads very well!

Digital Scott's Illustrationblog said...

Terrific and fun!

Anonymous said...

so super cute!! can't wait to see all these in color!! nice work!

Archie and Melissa said...

wonderful kathy!
you have executed all of your solutions perfectly. i totally get it and cannot wait to see the color and texture.
:) m

Unknown said...

The changes work really well. I love the new shop name, and there seems a greater distinction between the girl and the interior.

Jannie aka Chickengirl said...

Hey Kathy, It was very interesting to see your revisions on this piece. Its looking great..I especially like the lady on the side with the dog coming into the picture.

Gina Perry said...

Persistence pays! This is much stronger than the first version - and I like the store concept better as well.

Anonymous said...

Hi Kathy--love the changes...great to have so many art directors in your blog file huh? Now it says window and the for sale signs are great, she is looking at the window and thinking which one..the lady walking by with her dog adds another dimension...very nice..

can't wait to see the colored version..

take care,
carol

ellencrimitrent said...

looking very good miss Kathy!!

Ellen

Anonymous said...

kathy, the revisions are really wonderful. i can't wait to see it finished! thanks for sharing!

teri

Kathleen Rietz said...

Very nice revisions...now it reads more like a store window. And the person walking the dog adds a possible story angle. Isn't it great to have such great help out there??