I have "inked" the art in Flash. I drew in the middle "huddle" girl, but found that she was not working in the composition. No matter what I tried she was off, but then I tried it without her, and I liked it so much better in every way. I like the idea of having one more girl; I think it's good for the story the picture tells-- three has an even stronger "us vs. them" vibe. But I thought this worked as well-maybe a little subtler, but still successful. Plus, the looks on their faces is very important-expressions say a lot. To that end, for the middle girl, I am aiming for a slightly annoyed, slightly bored, kind of snotty, glazed-over, ***SIGH*** expression. The girl on the left is just completely engrossed in what she's saying.. And of course, for our hero to the right, I am looking for a two-thirds abhorring, one-third wistful expression.